Hi everyone. I am attaching a draft set of paragraphs for David Clark's final report on the Summit. You'll see that they consist of one paragraph on process and then essentially a translation of our powerpoint from Thursday afternoon into text form.
Suggestions on improvements are welcome, especially if they arrive quickly.
Ellen - excellent writeup, Martin - excellent changes. Here are some minor comments.
I suggest adding the title - Internet for Everyone (Really). Dave is likely to need one.
In order to identify ourselves as IFER from now on, I suggest that we add the word "finally" between the words "and" and "Internet" in the sentence before the first bullet.